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I shall build a boat.
I shall cast it in the water.
I shall sail away from this strange place.

Here, the stars are all dim.
The heroes here are all dead.
Here, the angels all weep.

Here, seated along every road
is the demon of duplicity, disgrace, and deceit.

Against these ascetic hypocrites
I know this fight is not easy.
This place has long been Satan's nest.

I shall build a boat.
I shall cast it in the water.
I shall sail away.
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namarie95 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013
sigh
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chewbakka Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2010
amazing!
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vahid-naziri Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2010
Thank you so much, my friend.
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7oran Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2009
Very nice.:)
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DAVIDEART Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is a great shot!!!!Bravo!!!!!
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vahid-naziri Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2009
Thank you so much, Davide.
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DAVIDEART Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Welcome, always
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Laysa Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2009
wonderful image!
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vahid-naziri Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2009
Thank you so much, dear. :blowkiss:
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Forestina-Fotos Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Lovely imagery in both the photograph and poem. :clap:
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vahid-naziri Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2009
Thank you so much, my dear. :rose:
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madtattooz Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2009
Awesome!
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vahid-naziri Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2009
Thank you so much, my friend.
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Windhaven Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2009
beautiful, the picture, the poem... breathtaking.
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vahid-naziri Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2009
My dear Tamara, thank you so much. Your comments always make my day. :hug::heart:
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Phatgeek Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2009
Well written piece of poetry ..Only one little grammatical error ..

Here, the stars all all dim.
The heroes here are all dead.
Here, the angels all weep.


Change the first all , in the first line .. to are ..:)
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vahid-naziri Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2009
Thank you, Todd. It's fixed.
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Phatgeek Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2009
I am very happy you got it all fixed ..I recently came into some money , and went shopping for a new computer , for both my wife and i , and also a new digital camera .I thought about buying a Nikon SLR type like yours , but just could not part with the almost $900 required .. So instead I bought the new Nikon with 24x optical zoom ( equal to a 650 mm zoom lens ). Unfortunately the main reason I bought it , just did not get to happen .
I was going to take it on a trip home to my mothers ..She lives on a lake , and I would have been able to take some beautiful photos .
Someday I will go ..Probably Christmas ..
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